I...wha- do I...um...uhhhh
I'm 5'ing this b/c I feel you held nothing back while making this, and that just makes for great lulz.
I mean, that voice....just....... hilarious.
Very good and very cute! Lmao at the thumbs up guy at the end!
If I had been in that lake...
Awesome flash indeed sir :D
One of the overall best subissions ever.
Oh, and this is how it's done:
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Whatever happened to punkomatic.tk? That was a great site for submiting these songs.....
So juicy man, alot better than those atonal "dubstep" atrocities.
(from my last review), killed it man. I'm lovin the lyrics and I'm loving the flow from word to word; phrase to phrase. I would just add that your voice is perhaps just a little breathy. I'm not saying go rambo with your voice - the energy is great - but maybe support from abdominal muscles a bit more. I don't know, just play around with that idea, see what works.
Thanks for the criticism. I've always felt my voice was kind of breathy. I was hoping nobody would notice lol. I'll for sure be doing some ab work-outs before my next song. Thanks again for the feedback.
It's one thing to have some solid rhymes (which you seem to manage well), but it's a whole other thing when you fit them lyrically into a tight rhythm (like speaking rhythm, not just to the backing track). I can respect you as a rapper because you pretty much killed it here...in a good way of course. You also have a nice tambour to your speaking voice, which always helps :]
Keep it up man!
Thanks a lot!! It's really great to get this kind of feedback on here. I definitely hope to make some more like this.
Wow, such an awesome piece of art. I get the feeling that this could be some futuristic, alternate-universe drawing of Dorthy and Toto, but that could just be me.
This has got to be one of the best pics I've seen in a while. I mean Penguins amongst all the apocalyptic chaos? Righteous. Fantastic art too ;]
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