I really enjoyed this peice
First off, the piano intro is simply fantastic, it drew me in and made me want more. This song in its entirety is very well done, in fact it sounds dam close to professional.
Now, I thought the gated synth(piano?) was sensational when it came in at 00:28. Then the piano came in again at 00:42, and it just didn't sound right, iwas kinda hoping you'd build on to it but oh well. The build up of the beat was good all the way through i thought, and i liked the transition to the primary beat with the toms, simple and it got the job done. The cymbals are nice although i think you got a little crazy with them. I did like, however, that they came on the 2nd beat of the bar, giving the feeling of progression(at least to me :]). I like how you brought the arp in at 01:50, unfortunately from time to time the arp would contridict the melody, like it's not following the same chord progression that the song is, but I know that's kinda hard when the arp is moving through a full octave(maybe even 2 i can't quite tell). Now, the ending is very nice, but the drums just cut out at 02:36 with no transition, which kinda left me hangin. Maybe a reverse cymbal leading up to the cut-out would work, but that's just me.
Overall this peice sounds ridicualously awsome. It's well mixed and has a solid beat. You really need to keep this up man lol, ur friggin talented!
9/10
5/5
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