Yeah i could dance to this...
Sounds like i well pretty well put together song, all i have to say is the sudden kick/hit interuptions are maybe a little too sudden, but mostly over bearing in volume compared to the rest of the song, which has a rather soft overall tone. And the kicks form, 1:36 on sound really filtered and also too loud. I would suggest only filtering it a little and definitely lowering the volume. Of course if it's a sample kick, than i would suggest changing it altogether.
I think you should finish it, and i don't think it would hurt to add some cool fx here and there as long as they fit :]